For starters I have to say I love books and anyone who is a writer. I have respect for anyone who publishes a book especially for people who self-publish. That being said this is a book that doesn’t feel like it was ready to be published. It felt like the author wrote this book in a hurry and just wanted to get it out there. It has bad characters, bad dialogue and the story felt weak. I got the feeling that this is a brand new writer who had no help from an editor or beta-readers.
At first from the writing I thought it was meant to be a y.a. novel. Though as I came to a part where the lead character ejaculated in his pants I realized that this wasn’t the case. I hope Antoine keeps writing because he at least had a good idea here but you should never rush to put out a novel that needs so much work.